This was an assigned poem for my Literature--I thought it turned out splendidly actually. I said what I meant to say, in the way I meant to say it. We were required to present our poems in class on Tuesday. Needless to say, that experience was positively thrilling. (!!!)
P.S. It isn't suppose to ryhm, just in case you were wondering. It is a "list poem."
The Second Love
The strains of “Beautiful Dreamer” are floating down the alley, played by an amateur violinist.
Debussy is dancing his way across the ivories in the concert hall on Main.
The eloquent echoes of forefathers long passed are ringing in my ears, and “Give me liberty, or give me death!” in all its thunder, continues to resonate through all of our souls.
Life tastes sweet to me here on Liberty Street.
In the harbor a lady stands, stately and majestic in her glory, she is ushering in the boats of a host of foreign searchers, searchers who must find their hearts desire.
Black, white, red, yellow—they all come with vision, and are welcomed by the lady’s beacon of glory, and book of truth.
Far beyond human knowledge was a land yet untried, yet untamed—in the imagination of men’s hearts it was bursting with blessings unbounded.
The call of the unknown became irresistible to the searcher—he must continue on in boldness of purpose—or die in restless curiosity.
The deafening sound of leave-taking rose up in the East; westward ho, the forty-niners go, on to the bitter brightness of the coast.
What can be said of these relentless wanderers?
What is this passion so strong as to tear them away from every warm hearth of familiarity?
It is that which continues to urge our feet forward, not now in conquest, but in a quest born of the freedom fires in our veins,
It is that status as the guardian of liberty that has led infantry to foreign fields of bloody battle, there to fight for freedom with every breath breathed.
It was by that same spirit that the dreadful swastika was destroyed in fire and brimstone.
It was by that same spirit that the Saddam statue fell.
And it is by that same spirit that we continue on, here in the land of the free, living out our lives as conscience dictates.
Up the marble steps go my eager feet; up the steps and through the foyer, they lead me, finally coming to rest as I settle in a mahogany bench.
There is a window here, the panes of which are colored and collected into a kaleidoscope of brilliance; the form of a lamb is visible in its pattern, and my eyes trace its fleece lovingly.
The organ swells, the people sing praise to the peak of a loud crescendo—and then all is quiet.
The preacher begins with a prayer, and all present have faith that the Lord of all is there.
The people have no fear of penalty or persecution—that which their forebears have borne.
They live in a land where faith is honored, and not punished, is worn proudly, and not hidden in the darkness of midnight masses.
Here is the haven where no tyrant may penetrate.
Here is the haven where dreamers dream unstintingly, and with greater abandon then ever elsewhere.
Out of love and devotion was this haven born.
Out of faith and fealty to the Master was it established.
So it is that by the workings of the first love has the second been given life.
My soul comprehends that suppressed, yet sacred phrase, “one nation under God.”
This is the second love, offspring of the holy first.
This is the first love made manifest—that firm foundation upon which this haven was built—thus the first love gives birth, then life, and then growth forevermore to that second love, so precious.
Wednesday, January 25, 2006
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I would give that A+! Nice job Rebekah.
Wow Rebekah! That is really logical and at the same time so poetic. How did the class and prof respond? I don't think I would have had the courage to read something like that at Whatcom. I was nervous reading it because pro-America things have a tendency to be arrogant, but you have simply expressed truth and thankfulness - refreshing.
That was beaufiful! It truly showed your devotion to your country.
That was awesome,Reabekah!
That was awesome,Reabekah!
Polite applause was the rule of the day--all were treated in this manner. The instructor let it be known that this was the time to excercise our free speech, so I think everyone was primed to respect each individual's point of view.
Today in utter frustration, the instructor sent his class away. Only a few of us were leading the discussion you see--all others were either snoozing or doing homework for other classes. In his (that is the instructor's) words, "you guys are not paying attention--come back next time ready to talk about literature." I cringe for my class. Not that I want to act so very righteous, however, it was a real dissapointment to me to have to pass up a class period in which we could have been soaking up the richness of the Enlish language! Ach!
Ahhh, that was simply beautiful. Good work!
pretty snazy!
Gracias.
"It was by that same spirit that the dreadful swastika was destroyed in fire and brimstone." One small point though: the US were late for battle there :)
True, however, "it was by that same spirit" nevertheless.
Don't you love the 'golf clap' :)
How funny that the instructor has to define a time to express "free speech". It is too bad that the class is inattentive to the instructor...but generally I've found that students respect the teacher as much as the teacher shows respect for them.
You definitely need to be an English-ish major Rebekah...who else says: "soaking up the richness of the English language." :)
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